so the reason i joined was because i really love writing and poetry so im gonig to post some of my peices because i would really like to get some feed back on them so i can improve!
so stay updated
bree


OrdinaryYour a boy... nothing special, just a boy you have favourite songs, favourite places to goOrdinary
you have friends and best friends
you have a family you hate and love certain things your just an ordinary boy...
But if your so ordinary, then why do I feel like peice of me dies every second that we are not together? why do I get the most intense butterflies when me eyes align with you face? why are you my air? why are you my world? why are you my everything?
Im a girl... nothing special, just a girl I have favourite songs, favourite places to go
I have frie


Utopian no moresunny day, blue skies surround you, walking along the sidewalk, huming your favorite tune without a care or doubt in the world, stuck in the four walls of your safe uptopian town then you glance to your left, and you see a man in a wheel chair with stubs for legs you glance to your right and you see a women sheding her hair for the curse of cancer you turn on the television and hear the terrifying stories of injustice 9/11, Holly Jones, cancer, wars being fought left, right and center you'd like to think that your sunny sidewalk was a refelection of the rest of the world but scientist are srambeling tUtopian no more


Whishing You Were HereI enter the ball, alone the ladies are in beautiful gownsWhishing You Were Here
the gentlemen are styling black tuxedos
The band begins playing some soft jazz everyone sips fancy martinees and mingles
As the fancy music begins to mellow out people pair of into dancing couples the floor is occupied with elegant couples dancing the waltz I'm left alone, looking for your face, wondering where you are
I listen to the saxaphone as it pulls ar my heat strings and reminds me of you Suddenly, a gentleman comes up and asks me to dance i hesitantly say yes.. what if you


EverydayIm sitting in this lonely place looking for a framilar faceEveryday
looking for the light will i see it tonight?
But for now i'll stay with you
stay in this silence we can light the candle and forget about our trouble we can look for the hope and forget about mopeing
Becasue even if the rain fell everyday even if the sun and the moon never came the music never played the singer never sung i know i'll be okay because you always take my hand and you lift me up everyday
regretting my decisions
forgetting everyone important letting myself sl
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They call me Cyrus, a fire bender!
[link] ~ by me
*I live day by day* ~ by me
*I don't break hearts, I fix them* ~ by me
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Rove lights my fire.
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~.Illegitimi Non Carborundum.~
Choices, Choices by *InuYashaSesshomaru
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Jannah Amin © JazMin ♥
♥ toastedbutter | jazminderr
anyways just dropping by to say thankyou for supporting my art
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<3 Bree
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<3 Bree
[link] - my art works
[link] - funny
[link] - myspace
[link] - Model Mayhem
xoxo good luck with ur poetry!
Ill be having a look!
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Jannah Amin © JazMin ♥
♥ toastedbutter | jazminderr
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Are you ready to break free? Do you want it all? To be a shooting star? A tiger! Defying the laws of gravity. Are you ready to be champions?
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